Writing - A for and against essay - Individual sports, Team sports.
Some people believe that play team sports is better than individual sports because playing individual you don´t meet new persons. However, playing individualy could be a great experience.
On the one hand, playing team sports is funny because you don´t only play with other persons you play with mates that in the future they could be your friends. In team sports you have to be worried for you and for your team. This could be bad for example, if you are in a team and you play all your games.
On the other hand, playing individual sports could be good because you depend of you and if you are good at this sport you will win and enjoy it. However you are playing alone (nobody like to play alone) and you don´t meet new mates and probably friends.
I had played individual sports and team sports so, in my view, I think that is better to play team sports because you could pass a great time apart of playing, you will pas a great time with your mates and if you play individualy or you are good at this sport or you probably get bored.
play team sports --- playing
ResponderEliminarpersons --- people, players
worried for --- about
play all your games --- play all your matches
I had played --- I have played
ADECUACIÓN: 2
COHESIÓN: 1,5
CORRECCIÓN: 1,5
RIQUEZA: 1
Mark: 6
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