In the one hand, staycations will be more relaxed because you are comfortable in your home and they are cheaper, if you want to save money to buy a special thing for you, staycations is a good way to do it.
In the other hand, holidays abroad you will go to another country or city and you will see very beautiful landscapes that in your house you won´t see.
In my view, holidays abroad are the best holidays that you can do, specially if you go to another countries. It´s a good kind of holidays, and it would be good to improve our culture.
they think that in staycations you can be more relaxed. --- they think that a staycations can be more relaxing.
ResponderEliminarin holidays abroad you would go --- if you spent your holidays abroad, you would go
another places --- other places
in your live. --- in your life.
In the one hand --- On the one hand
cheaper, if you want to save money to buy a special thing for you, staycations is a good way to do it. --- Punctuation
that you can do --- that you can take / spend / have
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